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OrganizationParagraph/ subpara/PG#Figure/ Table/ line #Type of commentCommentProposed ChangeResponseNotes on ResponseCensus Bureau 41.3Line 357EReduce duplicate efforts for address data collection, verification, and correctionReduce duplicate efforts for address data collection, deletion, verification, and correctionRejectAddresses should not be deleted. Their status should be changed. Spatial Bridge - 701/04/07510ESpacing problem causes title to be split across 2 linesAdjust spacing so that title fits on one line.Accept in principleLong title. Might not fit on one line.Census Bureau 701/04/13611EParagraph indented too muchChange indentationAccept Census Bureau 701/04/06489EParagraph indented too muchChange indentationAccept Census Bureau 701/04/09537EAfter ";OGC'S" the period should be a commaChange the period after "OGC'S" to a commaAcceptComma not needed, period removedCensus Bureau 71.7.3.1709EMissing ( in GITAAdd (AcceptWas this section changed based on what the orgs call themselves?Census Bureau 71.7.3.2721ENo need for the phrase (and sometimes arguments) - it suggests contention over this standardRemove phraseAcceptAlso change "over" to "of" in the same line. -- %BR% Also place the following paragraph in the past tense. Census Bureau 71.7.3.3735ELast two sentences of this paragraph are no longer true, since the standard has now been submitted.Remove last two sentencesAcceptRemoved,
Also removed italicized "Temporary Note to Reviewers" in 1.6 lines 645-647.Census Bureau 71.7.3.4744ENeed a comma after the word "others" for clarityAdd commaAccept
Also added a comma after "including" in the same line.Census Bureau 71.8752EU.S. Bureau of the Census is no longer correctChange to U.S. Census BureauAccept ChangedCensus Bureau 702/01/04873EIt is not appropriate to just say Census when referring to the Census Bureau, as that refers to the actual census taking.Add the word "Bureau" after the second Census. (The first is clearly an abbreviation, therefore OK)Accept ChangedCensus Bureau 72.2Entire sectionEOn "Definition" and 'Domain of Values for this Element', there is sometimes a period, sometimes not.Be consistent: either all periods or noneAccept Fixed Minnesota-102.2.1.1, Page 36 and 2.2.1.3, Page 39Line 945, and Line 949ECapitalization: In the XML example for 2.2.1.1, the word "Separator" is capitalized. In the XML example for 2.2.1.3,"separator" is not capitalized. Does it matter?Be consistent on capitalizationAcceptElement names should be capitalized.
Separator capitalizedCensus Bureau 72.2.1.3949- Notes/Comments #4EMissing ')'Add ' )' at end of 4.Accept AddedMecklenburg Cty -Buckner-1949.40 Spatial Domain Measure # 2 E"address point and an areal Address Number Suffix" typo?"address point and a real Address Number Suffix"Accept Changed Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-2951.40 Domain of Values # 3 E"prepositional phrase between the between a Street Name Pre Type" typo?Remove "between the"AcceptRemoved Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-3953.45 Notes/Comments # 8c E"with leading the zero(s)" typo?"with the leading zero(s)AcceptChanged Census Bureau 72.2.1.5953 - Other common namesEToo many ')'Remove last ')' after TIGERAcceptRemoved Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-4970.61 Notes/Comments # 3 E"in some cases must inferred" typo?Remove "must" or change to "must be"Accept Changed Minnesota-92.2.3.2, Page 66 and 2.4.7.3, Page 216Line 973 and Line 1364EXML examples for Subaddress Component Order inconsistent: Page 216 shows: SubaddressComponentOrder (starts with quotation mark, no spaces Page 66 shows: Subaddress Component? Order %BR%(does not start with quotation mark, includes spaces and question mark) Page 216: Page 66: Clean up XML examples for these elements.AcceptFixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-5979.72 Notes/Comments # 1 E"component elements pertain a wide" typoChange to "component elements pertain to a wide"AcceptChanged Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-6988.81 Notes on Regional Place Names E"Typically this is name of the central city""Typically this is the name of the central city"AcceptChanged Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-7990.83 Notes/Comments # 2 E"but it may necessary in other""but it may be necessary in other"AcceptChanged Minnesota-112.2.5.2, Page 84 and 2.4.7.5, Page 220Line 990 and Line 1368EInconsistent XML examples: %BR%On page 84 the XML examples for the Complete Place Name element shows "Place Name Type" with spaces between the words. On page 220 in the XML example the Place Name Type element does not have spaces between the words. Does it matter? Other instances like this exist with element attribute XML examples.Clean up XML examples so that they are consistent.Accept FixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-8998.89 Notes/Comments # 2 E"English names are specified because they a familiar""English names are specified because they are familiar"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-102.3.1.1, line 1046 pg 104 E"Thus it is important this the ""Thus it is important that the"AcceptChanged Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-92.3.1.1, line 1042 pg 104 E"Reference System Axis lines Address Reference System""Reference System Axis lines, Address Reference System" (add comma)AcceptAdded commaMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-112.3.1.2.1, line 1072 pg 106 E"would begin where the cross Main""would begin where they cross Main"AcceptChanged Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-122.3.1.3.1, line 1106 pg 109 E"more than Address Reference System""more than one Address Reference System"Accept ChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-132.3.1.3.5, line 1196 pg 113 E"Modifier rules may to allow or""Modifier rules may allow or" (remove "to")AcceptChanged Census Bureau 72.3.1.3.51196ESentence does not make sense: "Modifier rules may to allow or prohibit)"Remove the word "to"AcceptAccept Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-152.3.1.3.9, line 1237 pag 115 E"Address Reference System Range Breakline, Address""Address Reference System Range Breakline, and Address" (add "and")AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-142.3.1.3.9, line 1234 pg 115 E"(including the Address Reference System Axis elements""(including the Address Reference System Axis elements)" (add ending parenthesis)AcceptAdded Census Bureau 72.3.2.6.31260 - XML ExampleESame as aboveSame as aboveAccept DoneCensus Bureau 72.3.2.6.31260 - Example #4ESentence does not make sense: "(give the subdivision identify."Change "identify" to "identity"AcceptChanged Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-162.3.2.9, 1282.148 Notes/Comments # 2 Axial E"The grid may be deformed by typography,""The grid may be defined by typography,"Accept in PrincipleNote 2, under "Axial" I suggest additional edits: "...to define a grid with quadrants or directionals. The grid may be defined (and deformed) by..." Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-172.4.4.3, 1323.176 Notes/Comments # 2b E"how the address in mapped""how the address is mapped"Accept Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-182.4.4.5, 1327.178 Notes/Comments # 1 E"linear events may, turn, be related""linear events may, in turn, be related"Accept Census Bureau 72.4.5.21332 - notes/commentsEThere is a question mark that is out of place: "…are not used in creating the actual Address Range ? or in determining the Address Range Parity."Remove the '?'AcceptOn the same line, also place closing parentheses after "Parity", and lower case A, R for "Address Range" Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-192.4.5.2,1332.183 Notes/Comments # 2 E"actual Address Range? or in""actual Address Range or in" (remove the "?")AcceptOn the same line, also place closing parentheses after "Parity", and lower case A, R for "Address Range" Census Bureau 72.4.5.31334 - XML Model near the endEWrong article: "For instanceChange 'a' to 'an'AcceptDoneCensus Bureau 72.4.5.31334 - XML ExampleEToo many articles: "Note that this measure checks the agreement of a an Address Range Side)Remove the 'a'Accept ChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-202.4.5.4, 1336.191 XML Model "With - Against" section E"left side is nearer the from node. The low number on the right side is nearer the to node.""left side is nearer the from-node. The low number on the right side is nearer the to-node." (add the dashes)? from-node & to-node made consistent throughout Census Bureau 72.4.5.41336 - notes/comments #8EMissing periodAdd periodAccept AddedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-212.4.5.4, 1336.191 XML Model "Against - With" E"left side is nearer the to node. The low number on the right side is nearer the from node.""left side is nearer the to-node. The low number on the right side is nearer the from- node." (add the dashes)?FixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-222.4.6.4,1347.200 Notes/Comments # 2.1 Official renaming Action E"to provide for conversion to the new address..""to provide for conversion to the new address." (remove the extra period)Accept Removed Census Bureau 72.4.6.91357 - definitionEPlural 'addresses' should be singularChange 'addresses' to 'address'Accept Changed Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-232.4.6.9,1357.209 Definition E"Identifies whether an addresses receives""Identifies whether an address receives"Accept Changed Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-242.4.7.4,1366.217 Notes/Comments # 2 E"is omitted, is the sequence presumed to be""is omitted, the sequence is presumed to be"Accept Changed Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-252.4.7.5,1368.218 How Defined, "Region" E"For precise, systematic terms, Census terms and"Confusing. May need to remove the comma after precise or change the comma after terms to a semi-colon.Accept in principleRevise the phrase to read "If precisely-defined names are needed, Census Bureau terms and definitions..." On the same line, also place closing parentheses after "Parity", and lower case A, R for "Address Range" DoneCensus Bureau 72.4.7.51368 - How Defined, RegionEMissing article: Typically this is name of the central city…Add 'the' before 'name'.Accept AddedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-262.4.7.6, 1368.220 XML Model "Region" E"For precise, systematic terms, Census terms and"Same as previous comment # 25Accept in principleRevise the phrase to read "If precisely-defined names are needed, Census Bureau terms and definitions..."
Changed Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-272.4.7.6, 1370.221 Notes/Comments # 1 E"geographic names use by all departments""geographic names used by all departments"Accept ChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-282.4.7.7,1372.225 XML Model "SubAddress Excluded" E"The Delivery Address includes the complete Subaddress"Should this read: "The Delivery Address excludes the complete Subaddress" ?Accept Changed to 'exclude' Census Bureau 82.9.2.1Address Reference System Identification, Extent, and Authority, line 965EAppears to be missing a word: "more than one" Address Reference System as opposed to "more than". Accept Added the word oneMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-293.1.3, line 1454 pg 233 E"pattern, to emphasize that the importance""pattern, to emphasize the importance" (remove "that")Accept Removed Census Bureau 73.2.1.41848ETwo commasRemove one commaAccept Removed Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-303.2.1.4, line 1848 pg 252 E"transportation network model, then:""transportation network model, then:" (remove extra comma)AcceptRemoved
Also add closing parentheses after "segments" in the same line. Census Bureau 73.2.3.22340EWrong ( usedReplace with {Accept ReplacedCensus Bureau 73.2.3.22345EWrong ( usedReplace with {Accept ReplacedCensus Bureau 73.2.3.22351EWrong ( usedReplace with {AcceptReplacedASWG-1604/01/01Line #2723E"address schemes" should be "address reference systems" Accept AddedCensus Bureau 74.1.2.12738EThe comma is not the appropriate punctuation.Replace the ',' with a ';'Reject.These are short clauses, alike in form. In this case a comma is the proper punctuation.ASWG-174.1.2.1 ERework the first part of the first paragraph. Leave the final 2 sentences intact.Measuring quality requires its definition, found in existing standards. Those standards describing addresses, however, focus on the utility of a data set for specific purposes. The National Emergency Number Association (NENA), for example, has documented exchange standards. In this case, the quality standard is an established Automatic Location Information (ALI) file.Accept.DoneASWG-194.1.2.1Line # 2742EEliminate "checking" Accept.RemovedASWG-184.1.2.1Line # 2741EChange "that describe"enumeratingAccept.ChangedASWG-214.1.2.1 ENeed to list the metadata standards in question.Insert the following, after the first sentence in the paragraph These are primarily represented by two documents, the \x{feff}ISO 19115:2003 Geographic information -- Metadata\x{feff}Content Standard for Digital Geospatial Metadata (CSDGM), Vers. 2 (FGDC-STD-001-1998). The Spatial Data Transfer Standard (SDTS: \x{feff}ANSI NCITS 320-1998 ) touches on the subject, as does ISO 19113:2002 Quality Principles.Accept.DoneASWG-204.1.2.1Line # 2743EChange "a way of"forAcceptChangedASWG-224.1.2.1Line #2742ERephrase "They have quality reporting requirements that describe the elements of address quality."Replace with: These standards have quality reporting requirements that identify the elements of the genus spatial data, of which addresses are a species.AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 74.1.2.12739ENo punctuation is necessary in headingsRemove the '.'AcceptRemovedASWG-2304/03/01Line #2792EDescribe non-standard predicates.Where the pseudo code uses predicates beyond the SFSQL standard they are also noted.AcceptFixedASWG-2404/03/03 EClarify first sentence.Replace the first sentence with: "The PercConforming function measures the results of test for anomalies and describes the percentage of data elements that conform."AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 14.5.1, p302Line 2832EStreet number should be street name Reject.Street number is what was intended.ASWG-2504/05/01Line # 2820EReplace "address scheme"Substitute: "address reference system"Accept.ChangedASWG-2604/05/01Line #2822EReplace "Address schemes"Substitute "Address reference systems"Accept.ChangedASWG-2704/05/01Line #2832EReplace "Address schemes"Substitute "Address reference systems"Accept.ChangedASWG-2804/05/02Line #2847EReplace "case"Substitute "care"Accept.ChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-324.5.2, line 2847 pg 302 E"your own test, taking case to""your own test, taking care to"Accept.ChangedASWG-2904/05/03Line #2857EReplace "you may have a problem built into your address process."Substitute "the address process may need review."Accept.ChangedASWG-3304/05/04Line # 2865EEliminate "that you can handle"Delete itAcceptRemovedASWG-3104/05/04Line #2861EEliminate "you're examining"Delete itAcceptRemovedASWG-3004/05/04Line #2860EReplace "the data"Substitute "data"AcceptChangedASWG-3204/05/04Line # 2864 - 2865EReplace "help you see"Substitute "display"AcceptChangedASWG-3604/05/05Line # 2881EEliminate "your"Delete it.AcceptEliminatedASWG-3504/05/05Line # 2880EReplace "One simple thing to do is to record when each suite of tests was used."Substitute "Recording dates and times is often an important part of that documentation."AcceptChangedASWG-3404/05/05Line # 2880EReplace "what you did"Substitute "both processes and results."AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 704/07/012985 - Pseudocode ExampleEAdddressChange to: AddressAcceptChangedASWG-3704/07/01 EReplace "Completeness: a comparison of"Replace with "This measure compares"AcceptChangedASWG-5504/07/11 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "Check" with "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-5704/07/12 EAdd to the end of the Measure DescriptionAppend: Definition of those rules and the measures to check them are left to the user."AcceptAddedASWG-6004/07/14 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "Test" with "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-6204/07/16 EChange VARCHAR references in the Measure Description to TEXT AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 14.7.16, p350Line 3002EThis sentence is confusing: "Data that do not conform to a given field definition they should fail to load."Data that do not conform to a given field definition they should fail to load.Accept in principleThe "they" has been deleted.Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-354.7.16, 3002.350 Measure Name E"buried somewhere it the file.""buried somewhere in the file."AcceptChangedASWG-6104/07/16 EChange the 2nd sentence of the 2nd paragraph of the Measure Description: "Data that do not conform to a given field definition they should fail to load."Delete "they".AcceptRemoved theyASWG-6304/07/17 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "Check" with "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-6504/07/18 ERecast the 2nd sentence of the Measure Description.Replace: "This query returns TransSegId values for the ends of all disconnected segments." with:"This measure returns TransSegId values for the ends of all disconnected segments with potentially duplicate names."AcceptChangedASWG-6604/07/19 EAdd to the explanation before the function in "Pseudocode Example: Testing records"Append after "NEXT VALUE FOR.": "Nextval is used in the query to generate sequences of integers for checking ElementSequenceNumber values."AcceptChangedASWG-6704/07/21 EChange the lead-in to the Measure Description.Change "Check" to "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-6804/07/22 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests".AcceptChangedASWG-7004/07/23 EChange the second sentence of the Evaluation Procedure.Change "It can Note" to "Note"AcceptChangedASWG-7104/07/24 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Confirm that" to "This measure confirms that"AcceptChangedASWG-7204/07/25 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-7304/07/25 ERe-examine the query for testing the conformance of the data set.The query is long and confusing to the reader. If it can be simplified it would be helpful.Accept FixedASWG-7504/07/27 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-7704/07/28 EAlter the query to handle the ranges better.Use views if necessaryAcceptDoneASWG-7804/07/29 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Check" to "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-4004/07/03 EAdd sentence after "\x{feff}It is important to confirm the actual locations of the addresses."Add 'Even where the initial left/right information was derived from the geometry, edits to the data may have changed the parity relationships."AcceptAddedASWG-4304/07/03 EIn the 4th (last) paragraph of the measure description, change "In the latter case, you can"Substitute "In the latter case, it is possible to"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-334.7.3, 2987.312 "Pseudocode Example: Assembling Data" E"all the foreign keys, street name identifiers and distance between the the access point"Remove extra "the" between "between" and "access"AcceptRemovedASWG-7904/07/30 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Check" to "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-8004/07/31 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Check" to "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-8104/07/32 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Check" to "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-8204/07/33 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-8304/07/34 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-3904/07/03 EReplace first sentence: "Determine the side of the street centerline, left or right, on which each address is located."Substitute "This measure checks stored values describing left and right against those found by geometry."AcceptChangedASWG-8404/07/35 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-8504/07/36 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Check" to "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-8704/07/37 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-8804/07/38 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-8904/07/39 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-9004/07/49 EDelete embedded <br /> in query AcceptDeletedASWG-4404/07/04 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionChange "Test" to "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-4504/07/04 EAdd to the end of the Measure DescriptionAdd a final paragraph: The example given is very general. Further refinement may well be needed to account for the development process in any given community.AcceptSentence is addedASWG-9104/07/40 EChange the lead-in to the Measure descriptionChange "Checks" to "This measure checks"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-3404/07/04 E"This query produces a list of Address I Ds for ""This query produces a list of Address IDs for" (remove space in I Ds)AcceptFixedASWG-9204/07/41 EAdd Addressed Object.Geometry and Address Z Coordinate to Spatial Data Required AcceptFixedASWG-4604/07/05 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "Generate" with "This measure generates"AcceptChangedASWG-4704/07/06 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "Test" with "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-4804/07/07 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "Check" with "This measure checks"AcceptChangedASWG-5004/07/08 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "Test" with "This measure tests"AcceptChangedASWG-5304/07/09 EChange the lead-in to the Measure DescriptionReplace "The sequence of numbers" with "This measure tests the sequence of numbers"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-365.2.2.1, line 3099 pg 423 E"metadata into a accessible place.""metadata into an accessible place."AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 75.2.2.23119EWhy would a data consumer implement an export engine? Is this a mistake?Change 'export' to 'import'Accept in PrincipleCorrected Address Access-Simpson-165.3.3.2.5-5.3.3.6.1 Pages 433- 4583175-3232EExploded diagrams illegibleEach one should have been split on to two or more pagesAccept in PrincipleFixedCensus Bureau 76.13417E'(I informative)' does not make senseChange to: '(Informative)'Accept FixedCensus Bureau 76.13237EThis standard has now been approvedChange from 'INCITS38:200x' to 'ANSI INCITS 38-2009'AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 76.23583-3592EFont size appears different than the rest of sectionChange font size to match rest of documentAcceptFixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-377.1.1, line 3845 pg 480 E"indicates the directional taken by the""indicates the direction taken by the"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-427.1.1, line 6573 pg 541 E"might be a treated as a Landmark""might be treated as a Landmark"AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 77.1; pg. 4753596-3598EThis section is a different fontChange font type to match rest of documentAccept FixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-407.1.1, line 4943 pg 505 E"Feature I Ds to the features it represents.""Feature IDs to the features it represents." (remove the space in ID)AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-417.1.1, line 5033 pg 507 E"addresses receives USPS mail""address receives USPS mail"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty- Buckner- 397.1.1, line 4267 pg 490 E"a familiar and concise,""are familiar and concise"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty- Buckner-387.1.1, lines 4156 thru 4164 pg 487 ELines 4156 thru 4164 are an exact duplication of lines 4148 thru 4155Not sure if these sentences are supposed to be listed twice or not.AcceptFixedCensus Bureau 77.4.1; pg. 5567068ESentence is awkwardRewrite: (and differentiates between the scopes of the two standards.Accept1. Revised to read "Section 7.4.2 sets forth the relation between addresses and transportation networks, restates the scopes of the address standard and the transportation standard, and defines the relationship between the two standards."
2. Also, in the following bullet items, changed "Section 3" and "Section 4" to "Section 7.4.3" and "Section 7.4.4" respectively. Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-437.4.2, line 7110 pg 558 E"Address Reference System Range Breakline. and Address Reference""Address Reference System Range Breakline, and Address Reference" (punctuation between "Breakline" and "and" should be a comma)AcceptComma addedCensus Bureau 77.4.2; pg. 5567078EThe sentence is missing an 'and' and a period.Rewrite:…incidents, and infrastructure components such as poles or hydrants. (add the 'and' and replace the ',' with a '.')AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 77.4.4.1; pg. 5637202EHeadings do not have periodsRemove periodAcceptRemovedCensus Bureau 77.9.1.4; pg. 5797300E'(see 2.8.2 below)' - There is no section of this number belowReference the correct section - 7.9.1.6Accept in principleDeleted "(see 2.8.2 below)" Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-457.9.1.6, line 7323 pg 580 E"The Content Part address standard""The Content Part of the address standard"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-467.9.3.7.6, line 7820 pg 597 E"The address standard is also be related directly""The address standard is also related directly"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-477887.6Table 3 "website"E"Collection of Web pages that common to""Collection of Web pages that are common to"RejectDo not correct. This is part of a quotation. Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-44Appendix F, 7236.571 "US National Grid Coordinate" E"Usng Coordinate Spatial Measure"Should Usng be USNG?Accept Fixed Mecklenburg Cty-Buckner-52NENA Profile 9.1, line 560 actual page 26 E"all values not found the IETF Place-type""all values not found in the IETF Place-type"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-50NENA Profile 7.2.2, line 224 actual page 10 E"abbreviations as given USPS Publication""abbreviations as given in USPS Publication"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-49NENA Profile Line 65, actual page 3 E"4. 4. Briefly""4. Briefly" ( RemoveAcceptFixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-51NENA Profile 7.2.6, line 270 actual page 12 E"abbreviations as given USPS Publication""abbreviations as given in USPS Publication"AcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-55NENA Profile 9.2, line 596 actual page 28 E"Publication 28 Appendix C.1.. Convert""Publication 28 Appendix C.1. Convert" (remove extra period)AcceptChangedCensus Bureau 7NENA Profile, 2.69EThe entire title of the standard is not italicizedMake the letter 'T' of Thoroughfare italicizedAcceptChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-53NENA Profile 9.2, line 564 actual page 26 E"Address I Ds and Address Authority,""Address IDs and Address Authority," (remove space in "Ids")AcceptFixedCensus Bureau 7NENA ProfileEntire profileEPage numbering did not work - they all say Page 2Add pages numbersAcceptFixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-54NENA Profile 9.2, line 586 actual page 27 E"word as given in as given in USPS Publication""word as given in USPS Publication" (remove redundant "as given in")AcceptRemovedAddress Access-Simpson-17NENA Profile Page 2, but which one? E29 pages all marked as "Page 2"See if it can be gotten with proper pagination, or manually adjustedAcceptFixedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-57Postal Addressing Profile 9.1.7.1, line 674 pg 32 E"will differ according the base standard""will differ according to the base standard"Accept ChangedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-58Postal Addressing Profile 10, line 767 pg 36 E"defines three general three general levels of conformance:""defines three general levels of conformance:" (remove redundant "three general")Accept RemovedMecklenburg Cty-Buckner-56Postal Addressing Profile 7.7.2, line 435 pg 21 E"to Place State ZI Ps,""to Place State ZIPs." (remove space in "ZIPs" and change comma to period)AcceptFixed
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